I recently received a “professional song critique” from “The World’s leading independent A&R company” Their words not mine ![]()
SOOOO, I wanted to share it with you…
The critique is for the song “I Want 2 Fall n Luv w/ a Beautiful Grl”
If you haven’t heard this epic 6 minute song… you can check it out here: ITUNES

HERE IS THE CRITIQUE….

Deezer
Get the fuck back on the sleigh!
March 29th, 2013Captain Anus
Sweet album, got it the first day it came out. Currently have this song on repeat. Release some lyrics so we can sing along. I can figure them out but for the people who can’t lyrics would rock!
May 15th, 2011Dr Mendez
That seems to be all praises, good job! Perhaps Summer Rain would have gotten more points with the hooking and/or with mainstream-approach. It totally hooked me before the 35th time I listened to the album. Then I Wanna Fall in Love w/a Beautiful Girl totally became my favorite.
Anyways, your stuff is still awesome and fresh, and the greatest shame in the second album is that it’s too short. Shaaaaame. Shame on that guy, too, for the mainstream suggestion, the world needs more cool snacks, ’cause I’m hungry.
September 17th, 2010Jesse
I never took notice of the production on this song, it really is fucking amazing
September 11th, 2010BurgerJerk
Marc tighten up your Anus, not your lyrics…and oh yeah tell slater not to wash his dick
September 1st, 2010The fanciest man on the internet
@ long time fan
You need to open your musical sense a little bit more, my friend.
Of course marc COULD have made another cd with a million short songs, but instead, he kept it real and came out with something totally different.
That’s called being a musician.
progress has nothing to do with ’selling out’
September 1st, 2010Brained
‘long time fan’ I dont think marc gives a fuck if an ignorant racist like you thinks he has sold out.
September 1st, 2010long time fan
as much as I hate to admit it, I think you’ve either sold out or just lost it. I’m sorry.
ultimate party collection vol. 1 is a testament to how white people can do anything better than black people though, including rap.
September 1st, 2010Anon
Tighten up the graphics, Marc.
August 31st, 2010oh woo robby dobby!
congrats on the review marc. not a total bury! but you def deserve a 10 on everything. it’s my favorite off the new album, fa sho, ho!
August 31st, 2010shawn
oh c’mon mark, ya know they gotta razz ya a little
August 30th, 2010broseph stalin
haters gunna hate
but all you songs kick ass nigga they just can’t handle it
August 29th, 2010LogNessFreshNess
Can I get two scratches for my homeboy Jesus?
August 29th, 2010Better give him one more!
Saragossa
I have to admit. Somehow your music is far more, errr, crass/extreme, than your cartoons.
Its basically porn-rap at times.
“Not that there’s anything wrong with dat…”
August 28th, 2010az
Yo Marc M DUDE, fuck em haters!!
August 27th, 2010U da bomb bro!
Dave
Fucking awesome, dude. If I were you that’s absolutely what I’d be looking for in feedback. Keep it comin man, you never dissapoint. Oh, except for ‘The Last Two Men On Earth’ too much for me, but still classy.
August 27th, 2010Miguel
None of Marc’s songs deserve less than an 8 on lyrics, don’t listen to what he said about the marketability shit, keep doing what you’re doing Marc.
August 27th, 2010boss
that guys dumb for not givin’ it 10 on everything mang
August 26th, 2010the president
That guy totally bought your album when he got home.
August 26th, 2010shaqfu
you’s a dike ho
August 26th, 2010DukeDonut
I think the melodies in that song deserve an 11. But the one’s would be written with penises. Just sayin.
August 25th, 2010jake
MARC! STICK WITH CULT STATUS! the mainstream dosent deserve you. they like nickleback.
August 25th, 2010TehSlapHappy
I would like to see one of Let’s Hit The Beach. Now that song makes me harder than abstract noun.
August 25th, 2010magicbologna
lol
very nice. you should send them every song you have. at least make sure they hear “a dude named Shawn”. they will definitely click the “engaging” box under lyrics for that one.
August 25th, 2010Lavender Kisses
Clearly that man’s never sucked a dick in his life yet.
August 25th, 2010HappySlice
Suckin dicks all the way to the top
August 25th, 2010Adam
Review his review now.
August 25th, 2010