Song critique

August 25th, 2010

I recently received a “professional song critique” from “The World’s leading independent A&R company” Their words not mine :)
SOOOO, I wanted to share it with you…
The critique is for the song “I Want 2 Fall n Luv w/ a Beautiful Grl”
If you haven’t heard this epic 6 minute song… you can check it out here: ITUNES

HERE IS THE CRITIQUE….



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27 Comments


  • Deezer

    Get the fuck back on the sleigh!

    March 29th, 2013

  • Captain Anus

    Sweet album, got it the first day it came out. Currently have this song on repeat. Release some lyrics so we can sing along. I can figure them out but for the people who can’t lyrics would rock!

    May 15th, 2011

  • Dr Mendez

    That seems to be all praises, good job! Perhaps Summer Rain would have gotten more points with the hooking and/or with mainstream-approach. It totally hooked me before the 35th time I listened to the album. Then I Wanna Fall in Love w/a Beautiful Girl totally became my favorite.

    Anyways, your stuff is still awesome and fresh, and the greatest shame in the second album is that it’s too short. Shaaaaame. Shame on that guy, too, for the mainstream suggestion, the world needs more cool snacks, ’cause I’m hungry.

    September 17th, 2010

  • Jesse

    I never took notice of the production on this song, it really is fucking amazing

    September 11th, 2010

  • BurgerJerk

    Marc tighten up your Anus, not your lyrics…and oh yeah tell slater not to wash his dick

    September 1st, 2010
  • @ long time fan

    You need to open your musical sense a little bit more, my friend.

    Of course marc COULD have made another cd with a million short songs, but instead, he kept it real and came out with something totally different.

    That’s called being a musician.

    progress has nothing to do with ’selling out’

    September 1st, 2010

  • Brained

    ‘long time fan’ I dont think marc gives a fuck if an ignorant racist like you thinks he has sold out.

    September 1st, 2010

  • long time fan

    as much as I hate to admit it, I think you’ve either sold out or just lost it. I’m sorry.

    ultimate party collection vol. 1 is a testament to how white people can do anything better than black people though, including rap.

    September 1st, 2010

  • Anon

    Tighten up the graphics, Marc.

    August 31st, 2010
  • congrats on the review marc. not a total bury! but you def deserve a 10 on everything. it’s my favorite off the new album, fa sho, ho!

    August 31st, 2010
  • oh c’mon mark, ya know they gotta razz ya a little

    August 30th, 2010

  • broseph stalin

    haters gunna hate

    but all you songs kick ass nigga they just can’t handle it

    August 29th, 2010

  • LogNessFreshNess

    Can I get two scratches for my homeboy Jesus?
    Better give him one more!

    August 29th, 2010

  • Saragossa

    I have to admit. Somehow your music is far more, errr, crass/extreme, than your cartoons.
    Its basically porn-rap at times.

    “Not that there’s anything wrong with dat…”

    August 28th, 2010

  • az

    Yo Marc M DUDE, fuck em haters!!
    U da bomb bro!

    August 27th, 2010

  • Dave

    Fucking awesome, dude. If I were you that’s absolutely what I’d be looking for in feedback. Keep it comin man, you never dissapoint. Oh, except for ‘The Last Two Men On Earth’ too much for me, but still classy.

    August 27th, 2010

  • Miguel

    None of Marc’s songs deserve less than an 8 on lyrics, don’t listen to what he said about the marketability shit, keep doing what you’re doing Marc.

    August 27th, 2010
  • that guys dumb for not givin’ it 10 on everything mang

    August 26th, 2010

  • the president

    That guy totally bought your album when he got home.

    August 26th, 2010

  • shaqfu

    you’s a dike ho

    August 26th, 2010

  • DukeDonut

    I think the melodies in that song deserve an 11. But the one’s would be written with penises. Just sayin.

    August 25th, 2010

  • jake

    MARC! STICK WITH CULT STATUS! the mainstream dosent deserve you. they like nickleback.

    August 25th, 2010
  • I would like to see one of Let’s Hit The Beach. Now that song makes me harder than abstract noun.

    August 25th, 2010
  • lol

    very nice. you should send them every song you have. at least make sure they hear “a dude named Shawn”. they will definitely click the “engaging” box under lyrics for that one.

    August 25th, 2010
  • Clearly that man’s never sucked a dick in his life yet.

    August 25th, 2010

  • HappySlice

    Suckin dicks all the way to the top

    August 25th, 2010

  • Adam

    Review his review now.

    August 25th, 2010

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